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Hey guys, so i was wondering, what would people think of my poetry? so please give honest reactions to poems. hope you guys enjoy.

Poem #1

At certain times,

When I hear the church bell's chime,

I think,

What if there's a little creature inside my mind,

Continuing to chink away at it,

While I simply wait,

Unable to stop it,

Only able to hate,

I wish that I could drop it,

I don't know what is happening to me,

But I think i'm beginning to see

Slowly everything becomes gray,

Don't know if i'll ever be ok,

I'm beginning again to realize the inhumanity,

Now I can truly understand insanity.

Poem #2

The world is a strange strange place, So many people, Too scared to show their face, Why are we at constant war, Isn’t it getting to be a bore? Not using science to help the human race, It’s making our planet a terrible place, We could have world peace, Why can't we simply all appease each other, Yet we don’t. And we won’t. The world is a strange strange place.

Please comment on what you thought about the poems!