Talk:The Verão Archipelago Conflict/@comment-5990838-20160421191709

I promised I'd comment, so here it is...

I thought it to be a good chapter, that worked well for an introduction, and, though I thought it to be a bit short, it gave a good glimpse of how Kris is going to be in this story.

My advice is to take a bit more care with punctuation in the future, because there was a lack of commas and, while I could understand the whole thing, it gets easier to read with more punctuation between sentences.