Talk:Dangerous Pursuit: Mad Dash for Treasure!!/@comment-4080028-20110927140825

Yo Red! When you get this comment, i'd just like to let you know that there is a section in the story up there where you had begun to make an edit involving Sara, but had stopped soon after (that's where the collab began to slow down.) I left a placeholder underneath that bit of dialogue for you, so that you'd know that you can still add in more detail to that scene you were writing.

Hope this helps you, in case you didn't realize sooner. :) I hope this isn't putting pressure on you either, since the real aim here was to help keep this story organized and intact. After all, it's up to us (you, GZero, and me) to keep this story in prime condition for anyone who has the time to read it all. XD Again, I hope this little reminder helps in some way. Good luck with that edit of yours, Red.