Talk:One Dream: Voyage 1/@comment-4072803-20140605045935

Alright me mates, it's that (first) time again! Time to give this whole thing a try! Let's set sail-

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Now, let's get this trip started!!

Writing: Undeniably good. I've said this a million times, but I'll say it again. You. Are. A. Better. Writer. Than. Me. Everything is awesome.

Character: Not much of it, but we do get a decent grasp of Chris's character. Then again, this is a debut chapter, so I came in not expecting much...

Plot: Once again, pretty decent, a overall good starting chapter. It's enough to get the reader to read the next one, but not so much that you feel overstuffed with info.

Overall: An outstanding debut chapter in an undoubtedly awesome series. I look much forward to re-reading the rest.

Final Score: 4.5 out of 10. Damn good.

Welp, it's time to head to the next island!! Set sail-

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