Talk:An Island Ruled by Pirates! A Storm and a Confrontation!/@comment-4080028-20140913221213

Gotta love those types of low-lives who prey on the weak. Looking forward to seeing them get wrecked. But anyway, I really wanted to say this is a nice first chapter you've got here. I, among other users, were mostly impressed to see you be among the exceptionally rare few who decided to write your story before adding pages based on characters and what not. Thought that was a nice breath of fresh air.

I'm also amused to see a few small connections between Golden Voyage 1 and the first three chapters of One Dream. The fact we have a young sailor in a small boat that gets destroyed at sea, goes looking for a new one right away, and ends up confronted by a group of pirates. Where have I seen that before? :P

Teasing aside, this is a nice easy way to introduce us to your characters and story. I like it. I'm especially amazed at how much more exciting and inviting Golden Voyage is, since it doesn't have any character, island, crew, ship or Devil Fruit pages to spoil what comes up next. So every detail is always a surprise. ^_^

Nice start, Frozen! Way to introduce yourself aboard the Ship of Fools!