Talk:Flight 1: The Trio/@comment-4080028-20130514213128

Yes!! The Angel Pirates' story starts anew! This was a rather interesting chapter, General. Not bad at all. I considered it pretty interesting that it starts off with Magnus and Leonardo dueling for a bit, before we get to a certain someone making his grand debut at last. ;)

The comedic parts were definately funny. I loved seeing the townspeople being surprised at how weak Blueberry is (or at least, in comparison to Magnus and Leonardo,) as well as him freaking out at first, when running into Magnus, and then afterward, Magnus' remark to Leonardo was enough to make me chuckle. "Cut your hair, you hippy." I love it. XD

The action seemed kinda low-key to me. It could have been more exciting, but then again, this is only the first "flight," as they're called. So I guess that's to be expected. I liked seeing Magnus and Leonardo in action, as it gives me a good feel for what they're like in a story. Magnus' boastful yet respectful attitude, and Leonardo's composed nature. Very nice, and very cool. :)

Nice chapter, General. I look forward to the flights yet to come. ^_^7