Talk:Simon's Story/@comment-4080028-20130420204539

This is a good first chapter, Ika. The first person narrative (or view, I can't recall which is which) and from what I assume, a realistic take on the setting helps make this stand out from our usual, average One Piece fanon stories here.

It was well written, with no mistakes noticable at all (at least by me.) This was an enjoyable read, and a good way to draw the readers in to what will surely come later. All in all, a very nice chapter for Simon's story (just to drop the title in there for added effect. :P)