Talk:One Dream: Voyage 2/@comment-4072803-20140605052303

Allright, it's that time again!! Set sail-

'''Zeon's Review Pirates! DON!!'''

Writing: As excellent as ever. The only thing I MIGHT have done was separate some of the larger paragraphs into smaller sections, but it doesn't effect the overall experience, so I'll let this pass.

Character: We got a lot more this time! The Marines feel remarkably fleshed out (despite us knowing next to nothing about them), and its nice to finally see Chris strut his stuff, so to speak.

Plot: Once again, a good boost. Finally some plot direction, and we get to see Chris's goal fully outlined.

Overall: If I had to say anything bad about this chapter, it'd be that I almost forgot to do the review, I enjoyed it so much!!

Final Score: A much better 4.9 out of 5.

Welp, it's time to the next island. Set sail-!

'''Zeon's Review Pirates! DON!!'''