Talk:Walk in the Rain Part 6/@comment-3507136-20150112003547

Now this was a chapter I found... very... difficult.... to find problems with!

I actually like the introduction and brief description you had on Nikk, quite the good setup. Though I hope you know I expect to see alot more of that now! Not just for potential main/main characters. But perhaps for villains as well. If not just a good appearance description or something for the brief characters... like red Dog Danny.... I'd like to have thought that he'd have more of a description if he's gonna be around for longer than 1 chapter...

In terms of Miko Nikk I really like her. Quite the interesting character, her power had me so interested that I actually cheated and ended up looking it up haha. Which is something I'm usually too lazy to do. So that's a great new thing for me in this story man, well done. ^^

The ending was quite interesting as well... :3 I like the way that Rinji literally woke up to a classic "wtf" situation haha. Just reminds me of the shenanigans that the Skylines often get up to. Or even what myself and my friends have gotten up to in the past. It literally had me laughing for a good few minutes! Wake up after a good long sleep to find a tied up bloke and odd looking girl in your main hall with your friends... all while in your pyjamas!! Hehehe xD

Good Chapter Rinji. Definitely my favourite one so far.