Talk:Walk in the Rain Part 12/@comment-3507136-20150907200119

Quite the interesting finale and arc indeed!!

The dialogue between Rinji and Ricky was most easily my favourite of all. Definitely amused by them both! I am happy with the ending but left slightly confused... they're aiming for the new world.... so are they already in the grand line? Surely they should aim for the grand line first if not.... after all, they gotta survive to the new world first!!

Only flaw I have is basically the same as earlier.... DESCRIPTIONS MAN. CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS. I WANT TO HEAR YOUR DEPICTION OF THEIR APPEARANCE AND WHAT I SHOULD TRY AND ENVISION. Not envison it entirely myself until you suddenly mention an article or two of clothing XD

Nonetheless I enjoyed this read, I hope my questions recieve answers on chat... as some aren't answerable in the story now. Keep up the good work.