Talk:Artemis D. Falko/@comment-3507136-20140105001438

Right. Where do I start on how ridiculous you've made this character.

Firstly I will start with some inconsistencies. Admiral Aokiji, is not and could not possibly EVER be the type of character to train and supervise someone. He's too lazy, and has his own ideals and methods. Most if not all the Admirals, are shown to always be (except for that moment with Kizaru and Sentomaru) the Work alone type. They're too powerful to require the need of ordinary marines. They're also busy and on some cases classed as secret weapons. I seriously doubt that Artemis could be trained or supervised by Aokiji. He's far too reckless and stupid from the sound of it.

Aokiji became a general inspector after retiring from being a Fleet Admiral. It's pretty obvious he has experience training marines. So I doubt Artemis would be the only person he'd train thus making the one time comment redundant. Also as I said above. He sounds far too reckless and stupid to have Sengoku even waste his time on Artemis.

Next off. If he is only a mere captain, He'd never be in any meetings that involve any of the Admirals or higher. He does not have the rank for it. Making the fact he could get away with questioning Akainu... redundant. This is probably the fourth if not more, descendant of a World Noble. I think you should quit while you're ahead. Not everyone is a world noble descendant. And if he was to defy them while being a marine he would be heavily disciplined.

If he had a worldwide reputation for causing trouble for the marines, he'd be either executed or imprisoned. That's how it worked for Shiliew. That's how it'd work for Artemis. If he defied an order from the Admiral (depending on the admiral), he'd be dead. If he helped pirates escape, or commited felanies against the government. He'd be arrested. There is no way he'd get away with it if he is as close with Kris as he is. I don't think there are ANY simple Marine Captains in the New world. I believe it'd be too violent a place. and I believe you've gone overboard with the ruling of 100 islands. You're going way too overboard with that. Tone it down. Alot. Even 4 islands is fricking impressive. And Taking islands that belong to Yonko? Given who the yonko are I don't think he'd be alive still. Alot of the recent info you've put in have spoiled this character, made him seem completely and utterly ridiculous and make no sense.

I suggest heavy revision on this otherwise it will be borderlining rule breaking.