Talk:A Door that Opens Part 1/@comment-3507136-20150908205922

I like it, but I can't help but critisize a few things. Or at least point at these things that bugged me.

Though I enjoyed the fact you started the story off with more than one member of the crew, I can't help but feel, as a reader, that I've missed alot of crazy antics. It feels like I've jumped halfway into a manga and not bothered to read the beginning... I also wonder that, given their whereabouts, shouldn't the surroundings and previous final island of the grand line been a bit... well... more dangerous?

I can't help but practically assume and conclude that the tiger stripe pirates took quite possibly the safest route ever in the grand line. As to why you ask? Well, they practically completed the first half of it with just 3 people (since ricky and nikk were just recently concluded at the end). Not only does that seem highly difficult to me. But it's also seemingly a never before done thing. Given the strength of Usagi and Chio (no offence to them I actually find them very interesting). I find it quite difficult to fathom how a three man crew managed to get through the grand line on the ship. When it's already stupidly difficult for a whole crew of 30+ to do it. ..

Rant over haha...