Talk:The Duelist and the Runaway. A Grand Battle at Whisky Peak!/@comment-4080028-20130108180750

Finally got around to reading the story as far as it goes, and I was very amused by it, bro. I have to be brutally honest, I was never fully aware of every last detail you had for most of your pages here, and the Obsidians were no exception. Now, on the bright side, this gave me a good look into what they're like as of now, and I enjoyed what I saw.

The storytelling and pacing seemed really well done, and very professional to me. Plus, you did a good job at being funny when you wanted to be funny, and being serious when you needed to be serious. As for the characters, Dimitri intrigues me in a very good way. At one point, I thought I had him pegged as brilliantly insightful, and then you go and make him blissfully unaware that he entered the Obsidians into the tourney. Also loved how he misheard Jessica's mentioning of how they were willing to destroy the bar. lol

And of course, it goes without saying that I find Jessica and Bergmont very mysterious by this point. I'd definately continue reading just to satify my curiousity. And now, as i've become inspired by Dimitri's analytical skills, I have deduced that there will be more to this story, as the ending doesn't seem to be a proper end to a story. That's true, is it not?