Talk:One Dream: Voyage 5/@comment-3507136-20130116175201

Hm, quite a good chapter in general. I loved the self conducted performance! Even the female voice and body could be envisioned in my head. It was very amusing and left me in stitches!

However, I have a problem (sort of) with the newspaper. I don't think they'd mention the human auction area so carelessly. As such I would've thought they'd just mention the area instead. However, I could be wrong but I felt the need to say.

I deeply enjoyed this calm chapter and am curious to see whom 'Street Punk' really is! Heh, good work again wyv :)