Talk:One Piece of Music: Chapter 1/@comment-4080028-20131203171700

Finally got around to reading chapter 1. So it seems you're doing what I refer to as novelized format. I also see you have quite the decent vocabulary. Nice to see how descriptive you are.

Heh, it was a rather fun, if albeit kind of short first chapter. Especially loved the jokes involving Thoosa and Ruriko. lol Rather interested to see how Thoosa ended up in this situation to begin with.

Well, good chapter all around, man. Nicely done. :) Oh, and the VIP idea down near the bottom is a nice break from the more commonly seen chapters. I like it. Good luck with the rest of One Piece of Music.