Talk:Grand Voyage- Log 1/@comment-5023449-20150624042916

And here he comes, the knucklehead of the Marimo Pirates, Dhahaka D. Knave (finally got the name right on my first attempt http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/shipoffools/images/9/94/Finally.gif). Ironically, he may have washed up on the island because of a cyclone, but, truthfully, Knave is the real storm. I'm not sure how to describe Knave, since I've only seen so much of him, but, despite his dishonesty, he is honest. Meaning, despite him just eating the food, knowing full well he didn't have the money for it, he would've found a way to pay it back, very unlike a typical Pirate. I refuse to attempt to type the rich kid's name, because there's no way I'm gonna remember it currently. However, he seems like a spoiled brat, not entirely, but, it's still there. I wonder if Knave and the rich kid will fight. I know he would join the Marimo Pirates eventually, but, I don't know his reasons as of yet.

Anywho it was a nice first chapter~. Although, I would suggest you proof read over it, because there are some spelling mistakes, and I had a little difficulty understanding a few parts here and there, but, it was probably just me.

I look forward to the other chapters, Zeno~. Nice work~.