Talk:Paendrag D. Artur/@comment-464536-20121122193546/@comment-3507136-20121122214819

As you have asked, I shall provide you with feedback. I do apologise if you dislike it.

He is an interesting character, after all, descendent of the throne of the fallen kingdom is something of a concept I believe no one dared to go. And it is original, therefore I like the fact of it's originality. As it's not something myself would have thought of. For that I aplaud you.?

Him being a Revolutionary commander... would mean that at one time at least, he would have met, if not served under or beside Nova, Dragons right hand right? :P I feel a collab running~ hehehe

I like the name.. despite the difficulty in understanding it heh.

I feel it to be slightly... well, over powered, to fight on par with an admiral despite being fatigued and injured is something I wouldn't imagine, heck, Nova just about beat Kizaru and he fought him at full strength. So thats a negatory I believe amigo.. but if you feel I'm being too harsh feel free to bring it up with the uber committee.?

I think the summoning is creative. But I think it's copying the naruto concept waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too much. I don't think it's possible even after reading your explanation. I just don't see it. And I don't think it should be there. If he's as strong as you say so, then why does he even need to have this naruto summoning stuff. I mean, if he is that fast to grab that animal and bring it back to the exact place so easily, then why not just finish the opponent off instantaneously? Basically, you catch ma drift, I feel it too copied from Naruto and this site after all is ment to be for originality and creativity (I'm saying this but I don't read many pages here unless requested too... so don't call me on it ;) )

Anywho. I believe he is a cool character. But there are those two things I really dislike. Sorry amigo xD