Talk:We Are the Auroha Island Rebels! It's Time to Take Back our Island!/@comment-27169256-20140917205121

And here we are at Chapter Four

Since you already told me your circumstances on the chat, I won't go into a full review this time and just keep it short and sweet.

So in this chapter, Wanamo is shocked to see White's simplicity (a little Luffy I see) and is surprised that he accepted so easily. Good, you are adding more and more to White's personality and how he reacts to situations which can help flesh him out. I still wish there was more descriptions so I'll wait for your future chapters.

So I'm assuming next chapter we're going to get into a serious conflict with White joining in a rebellion. I'm looking forward to seeing some of the changes you intend to implement in the next chapter.

ONTO THE NEXT ONE