User blog comment:Fantasy Detective/Pokemon SOF! Chapter 5: A Queen and Idle in Graphite!/@comment-4080028-20150109024148

'''SO! WORTH! THE! WAIT!!!''' +_+

SERIOUSLY!! THIS is why I knew being patient and waiting for chapter 5 would pay off! FD, you keep ceasing to impress the ever loving crap out of me!! You made one more solid, awesome, exciting, moving and all in all great chapter of PokeSOF! :D Typos and the like aside, this was definitely wirth as much of a read as the 4 previous chapters before it! MAN!! When I finally understood why this had "The Queen" in its chapter title, I could feel my heart almost bursting rom my chest with excitement! HELL. THIS WHOLE CHAPTER MADE ME FEEL MORE EXCITED THAN I EVER HAVE BEFORE IN WHO KNOWS HOW LONG!! This story of yours is a '''WORK. OF. BEAUTY!'''

And I wanna once again express gratitiude towards FMF for being the awesome supportive editor that he is, since without him, I'm sure we'd have had to wait longer for FD to finish, and there may be some unseen mistakes along the way (not to diss FD. <_<) And... well... I-I... I l-love... ... ... ...

' I. F******! LOVE!! THAT!! DRAWIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  +_+' DUDE!!! Nidaime Tsuchikage has AWESOME art skills! Tell him Wyv expresses a helluva lot of love, admiration and excitement for drawing that Wyv and Regina picture!! And that from one aspiring mangaka to the other, I wish him huge success and enjoyment in his career! YOU HAVE MY 910% SUPPORT, NIDAIME TSUCHIKAGE!!! :D

And FD... =_= If you don't tell him any of that... I will rip your long nose off and FEED it to you. OK? ^_^

'''BACK TO THE EPICNESS! :D'''

OK, so, where do I even BEGIN?! GAH!! I have to admit, Twin Emy kind of got under my skin sometimes. XD So seeing me beat her Plusle felt SO satisfying. And, gah... the... the feels... The anguish of my beloved Squirt's defeat... the guilt of letting him down, and knowing FD needed me... And the anxiety and tension of trying to work with Regina... I could feel all of it. And I loved every second of it. Argh, I could so connect to my counterpart here. Not lying. Not joking. Dead freaking serious here. Like "yeah, if Pokemon wasn't a video game, if I was that age again, if I didn't know as much about pokemon as I do now, and if I was in that situation, I'd do the same damn thing." Just... Regina... I f****** love you, my beautiful Electric queen. T_T I would travel to Hell and back, as your faithful and loyal subject, if it meant keeping you and Squirt happy, healthy and safe. Those two pokemon are my pride and joy. They're my babies! T_T My beautiful, wonderful babies!!

AND THE BATTLE!! EPIC!!! JUST FREAKING EPIC!!! +_+ I never even KNEW you could pull off such an effective combo between Plusle and Minun like that! And FD's use of Agility!! At first, I was like "oh, OK, so he's gonna build up speed and strike even harder. Alright then." But then... HE TURNED THE FREAKING TABLES BY BEING A SUPER BADASS GENIUS!!! FD, if I was a woman, I'd be your biggest f****** fangirl ever. And I'd kill any other woman who dared to so much as lay eyes on you. =_= You're just that freaking awesome in this story!! XD Makes my willpower, fighting spirit and shounen hero traits look boring in comparison. XD Keep being awesome, FD!! ^_^

Ugh, that battle, I swear. I could go on and on. You being the brilliant strategist with all the insight, and me with the epic heroic spirit and love in my heart. When Regina got her name and accepted my friendship, I could feel myself crying tears of joy inside. We're a badass team, FD. No one f**** with us. B)

Oh, and I apologize if I'm swearing too much here. I'm just so super excited about how this chapter turned out! XD When I get excited and hyper and worked up like this, I lose control of what I say and put out into the world. >_> So I just sorta say what comes to mind and what comes from the heart. (Insert epic pose here. B) )

Ohhh man, and the HUMOR. You're a funy, funny dude as always, my man. I can't even choose any favorite scenes here, because it's all glorious. Like Caring talking about FD in her sleep, and FD going "even in her sleep?!" When Wyv laughed at this, I swear by all that is holy, I was laughing at the same time too. XD So I know for certain that you have my character down to a T. :) Oh! And I loved Zeon's flipped out reactions too. lol Mostly when he realized I went ahead and was going to challenge Cara. I admit, I was thinking "oh s***, he shouldn't be doing that. 0_0" But at the same time, seeing him so energetic and worked up like that made me smirk too. XD Oh man, and FD's reaction to Caring and my attitude about Zeon's condition. Acting like he was dead. I could see our faces now. Looking like Luffy and Nami did in the Rocket Man, when they were thinking about Usopp and going "the Perfect Clima-Tact is his last invention... V_V" Imagining us like that had me trying to resist cracking up. XD I'm surprised my sides aren't hurting. And I loved FD's "date" / shopping trip with Caring. Being the guy who has to carry everything. And to top it off, he was getting uncomfoatble with hanging out with Kaze. XD

OH!! That's another thing! I LOVE how you managed to incorporate Kazekage into this! I never would've assumed! o_o And that was an amazing twist for me, to see it was 13th who's our mentor! There's only a small handful of people I'd trust to guide me in the right direction. And for one reason or another, I have full faith that chaos and disorder incarnate will nudge me in the right direction. Though I can only imagine how much patience he'd need in order to not get too dumbfounded by my idiocy. XD Sorry mad bro, but I rely on your intelligence, as I have none. :P

Speaking of revelations, it's awesome to see who the first gym leader is! Cara, ay? This oughta be good! Seeing him as a Grass gym leader reminds me of my own made up region, Furo, where I chose a Grass gym leader to be the region's 1st gym leader too. Great minds think alike, no? I can't wait (but I can) to see how this fight turns out. Hell, you may end up inspiring Crescent and me to make our own Pokemon story even better than it is now. (In fact, I gotta get Crescent to read this. He's missing out. =_= The fool!!)

Oh man, what else, what else, what else...? Hmm... Guess I can also say that I like the atmosphere you've set up. Seeing Prof. Kai being sleepy in the middle of the night, and then how lazy, peaceful and comforting Graphite Town is made me feel sleepy and cozy too. Wanted to fall asleep while I was reading, but I fought on to see how much more fun this would be. +_+ Very nice work at showing us just what the setting is like. Npot too much, not too little. Just right to get the point across. I could learn from you and FMF in this regard. I need to better express the feelings of my scene through my writing. Like you guys.

And I deeply pray Zeon makes a swift recovery. >_< I WILL NOT STAND FOR MY RIVAL BEING TAKEN OUT OF COMMISSION BY SOME DAMN BEEDRILL POISON! ZEON AND I ARE CAPABLE OF OUSHING OURSELVES TO GREATER HEIGHTS! SO I KNOW SOME STUPID TOXINS WON'T BE ENOUGH TO STOP HIM!

'''YOU GOT THAT ZEON?!! GET BETTER AND THEN GO AND GET CARA'S BADGE!! YOU'VE AWOKEN MY COMPETITIVE SPIRIT, SO IT'S YOUR RESPONSIBILITY TO CHALLENGE AND PUSH ME FARTHER! GET BETTER, YOU IDIOT!! YOU, ALADDIN, NEMOY, POOCHYENA AND THE REST!! SQUIRT, REGINA AND I WANNA TAKE YOU GUYS ON!!!'''

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With that said... ^_^ Yeah, hope the guy isn't too badly beaten up. I'm afraid of what kind of aftereffects may have been left behind. >_< I wanna see more of Zeon, and I wanna see him get stronger, better and cooler. Because I know he can be. And he's just an awesome, entertaining character in general. Everyone in this story is awesome. So I don't wanna lose anyone just yet. (Even if that is pretty selfish of me. ^_^; But c'mon, you guys are mah buddies. D:)

Hmm... what else, what else...? OH!! I love how TMs and HMs are being depicted in this story. Um, FD... Mind if maybe Crescent and I borrow the concept for our own story? ^_^ I love it so much, that I'd be honored to have an element of this epic tale be put in my own Pokemon story. Oh, and now that I think about it, an Egg Move Machine (EM? EGM?) seems like just the kind of brilliant, bizarre, and unfounded approach 13th would take in the chat. I think that's very spot on for his character. Him having a Pangoro surprises me though. o_0 You'd think he'd have something more bizarre. Like Giratina. ...Then again, if he has a Ditto, that'd be fine too.

OH!!! And I LOVE how epic my dad sounds! +_+ A regional champion, a Dragon Master, and a user of legendary Dragons. BAD. ASS. I have to admit, in real life, I'd probably be doing what I'm doing in this story. If I knew about my dad, but he wasn't around, and I had the choice and ability to go out and search for him, you're damn sure I would. And yes, even if my real father isn't a Dragon commanding trainer and champion badass, I'm still very proud of him. If you met him in real life and got to really know him over time, I think you'd know why. Talented artist, writes his own songs, served in the military, strong, tall, compassionate, smart, funny, loving, and kind. He has his flaws, but who doesn't? I love the guy, and wouldn't want anyone else as my dad. So seeing my trainer counterpart feel this attached to his dad, it just felt so real and true to me. Spot on, man. Spot on.

Aggghh, time is short, and I'm running out of things to say. I'll leave my Cawstwolmian rambling at this: I'm surprised Wyv wasn't nervous and freaked out about the idea of visiting a human hospital. lol In real life, I'm terribly squeamish. Can't handle surgeries, hospitals and ESPECIALLY dentists (I'm way too sensitive to pain and discomfort, because I'm a sissy. <_<) I could see it being played up for comedy, like how Goku's afraid of needles. You have this headstrong and loving trainer who surpasses his obstavles with determination and inner strength, and yet he can't handle a simple trip to the hospital. XD Ah well. Maybe Wyv was just too tired from the day he had, and so it didn't faze him as much.

Finally, I am SUPER excited for chapter 6 now. I can't wait to see what our heroes are gonna do next. And what kind of battle against Cara will be like. I'm also excitedly awaiting the arrival of our next Pokedex holder. That should add some even more chaotic fun and drama to our group of aspiring trainers. It's so exciting!! I can hardly wait! >_<

'''KANPAI TO POKESOF!!! :D'''