Talk:The Story Of Rose. Chapter 0 (Pilot)/@comment-25892753-20141220224554/@comment-3507136-20141221002029

Yo fella!

It's the resident ancestor user here! I'll give ya some feedback because I know what its like to want it xD

The chapter is rather short for a first one, (I'm one to talk >.>) I felt like it wasn't really enough of an intro to the character or the story in general.

Not to mention that Logue town is just before the Grand Line and Sabaody Archipalego is at the end of the first half of the Grand line. It seems like an incredibly long distance to travel considering they can recieve orders and what not via Den Den mushi. Too me it just seems like one hell of a margin... when One piece spent about 500 episodes in just the Grand Line XD

I did enjoy the chapter as I hate reading stupidly long articles ( _ _) Fo shame I know but still! I'm rather interested in Rose' strength and four sword style, as my character Ice Blade has a five sword style, I'm interested to see how you'll use one less sword to your advantage!

I look forward to more chapters, and I apologise if I seem harsh... I'm quite the critic >.<