Talk:The 7th Heir: Chapter 1/@comment-3291800-20161012180717

As promised, here we go, Azu! My expectations before starting to read your story weren't low, but not that high either. That might or might not be the reason why I was blown away by how good this first chapter was. I had a blast reading it, honestly.

First of all, I want to ask you, is this story gonna be One Piece-like? Since, so far, it doesn't seem like anything we'd see in One Piece at all XD. That isn't a bad thing, mind you. Secondly, I absolutely love Argo as a character already, despite the fact he didn't show that much yet. Since what I have in mind for the captain of the Blood Era Pirates is something I feel would work very well together with a character like Argo, I already want to ask you for a collab XD.

Lastly, some advice. Read your chapters after you post them, since there are a few mistakes. It's nothing big, but hey, anything that can improve it, even if only a little, right? Also, the only thing that kinda bothered me was the "abusive" use of lines such as "Argo sighed."