Talk:Walk The Dragon Too/@comment-5008281-20160113002556

Nice story, Noodle. It actually has a much better order than its predecessor, and the character development was very well done. There was quite a long introduction for a short story, and there were also a great deal of dialog segments. Another thing was things that just sort of happened out of the blue with not a lot of build up. What did have a good amount of Build up was the ending segment, and I would dare say that it was a satisfying conclusion.

Great entry, with only a few gripes. Well done.