Talk:One Life:The Sea Warlord/@comment-4080028-20120514172444

Well holy hell, Rici!! It was one thing when you summarised it for me, but it's another thing entirely after reading it for myself! (Considering i've been reading a few chapters of One Life that I needed to catch up on, I got much more than what I was expecting from in this chapter, which is definately a good thing.)

Now then, I have to say in complete honesty, it felt like I was reading an actual One Piece story, so you get an A+ for effort there. I cracked up at some of Richard's more comical moments, but I was deeply moved when he got excited about finally seeing Fishman Island for the first time. I was like, "hell yes! Welcome home, Richard!" But when he gets beaten up and discriminated against by some of the Fishmen later, well... Yeah... That was a bummer. Glad to see Jinbe remove that disgusting mark from Richard's back though. (Makes me proud to have chosen him as my Shichibukai counterpart.)

All in all, while I might be being too impressed or swayed by what I experienced just now, and I might be acting childish here, all I can say is that I enjoyed this chapter, and all the chapters till now, and am feeling hopeful for the chapters that are yet to come. I have nothing bad to say about One Life right now, and can't think of anything that needs improving at the moment. Kepp up the good work, my awesome uncle! You have a fan in your faithful nephew.