Talk:Wild Card Pirates/@comment-24440410-20140606174350/@comment-27169256-20140608082143

Looks great so far, you've got the foundation of your crew which I always like seeing when someone makes a new crew. You've got quite the variety of characters I see, many from anime I know and some I don't.

The only thing I suggest is working on giving better reasons why they're bounties are going up. From what I see, you used the same explanation for each character except you changed the person they defeated You probably did this so that it could look finished and would work on it later which is fine, but I just thought I should point out that

Other than that, everything's looking fine and I await to see what you will write for the crew's dreams and changes over the time skip.