User blog comment:Fantasy Detective/Pokemon SOF! Chapter 3: Buggy Forest/@comment-4080028-20140710234030

Man, you're really getting into the swing of things here, FD! 0_0 Each chapter is turning out to be better than the last! +_+ This, like the last chapter, was WELL worth the wait!! :D

I'm LOVING the team dynamics here! How you, Caring and me interact with one another, and how our own pokemon interact with each other as well as us! There's so much I enjoyed about this chapter, I'm not sure I can recall it all from memory alone. XD This is proving to be one exciting adventure. +_+

...Well, I just scrolled back up and skimmed through the chapter to try and summarize everything I feel about it now. lol Firstly, I love how it begins with the aftermath of your defeat against Caring, and how you went into detail about how you (FD) was feeling about it. You're shaping up to be a very fun character to read about. +_+ So much like Usopp! I love it! I also love how it felt slow and relaxed at the start, but it got more exciting and faster paced as the chapter went on. It helped to draw me in further and further into the chapter; like a fishing rod reeling in its catch.

I really like how I'm being portrayed here. You can clearly see how I'm not the adventurous OR the competitive type, and am only going along on this whole journey because of my own personal desires. ^_^ I also really love how I keep shocking the crap out of you guys. XD Like "WHAT AN IDIOT!!!" or "HOW DOES HE EVEN DO THIS STUFF?!!!" XD It's awesome!! And I'm loving how Squirt's getting developed! +_+ I LOVE the way Zigzagoon got intimidated by Squirt's confident battle spirit/aura. In retrospect, he reminds me of Roronoa Zoro there. +_+ Just needs three swords, and there you go. XD I also loved seeing my pizza addiction get referenced. XD Can't go on a journey to find my dad (and beat some gyms on the side :P) without fueling up on pizza! :D And additionally, I loved seeing my Kalos starter, Chester, get mentioned. T_T YAAAAY!! CHESTER WAS INVOLVED!! ^_^

And finally, as far as I'm concerned, I am having a lot of fun seeing me be the one with the most difficulty in connecting with my pokemon, despite loving my pokemon a lot. +_+ This is going to a BLAST to watch unfold! The aggressive, knuckle-headed, inexperienced, kind hearted battler who has to learn to truly bond with his beloved pokemon. I don't wanna sound vain or egotistical, but I'm going to enjoy seeing my pokemon and I progress and mature throughout the SOF region. +_+

Oh, and on another note, I'm enjoying seeing a budding rivalry develop between Zeon and me. :D It's gonna be exciting seeing me compete with him over who gets to the SOF League first.

...GAH!!! I FORGOT!!! (Add the Jinbe fishface emote here. XD) I HIGHLY approve of how I was depicted when I was trying to catch Shinx. ^_^ That is EXACTLY what I'm like when I try to catch a stubborn pokemon. XD ...They frustrate me so. -_-++ But in related news...! lol I also really like seeing my difficulty in nicknaming her. It's true, I can't name recently obtained pokemon worth a damn, so I get picky and brainstorm a lot until an idea finally hits me. XD

YOU HEAR THAT, SHINX?!! YOU SHALL BE NAMED!! ...EVENTUALLY!! (add derp emote face here)

Back to the story itself...! I found it interesting to see some shady, dark figures appear in the middle of the chapter. And they seem to be planning something VERY important; ohoho... =_= And who may this Ryu person be? He certainly sounds like an impressive person. I suppose only time will tell until we learn more of these unannounced figures. =_= (<- Trying to look suspicious or something. lol)

Man, what else, what else...? If I sound overly excited and energetic, it's because I am. XD This chapter just has me so hyped up all of a sudden. +_+ Hmm... Oh! I liked the addition of the Viridian Forest music! ^_^ Nice touch!

And I guess that's that. XD Speaking of music though, I was listening to this piece of music while I was reaching the end of the chapter (which disappointed me. :( I didn't want to reach the end so soon. XD)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wQhdwmfULX0

I thought this was so fitting for the comedic aspect of how the chapter ended. XD Two boneheads running for their lives from a swarm of Beedrill. Of course, I know full well it's a dangerous situation too. Don't want to be poisoned to death or anything. >_< And there's still FD and Caring to worry about! But still, I couldn't help but go "man, why does this just make me laugh harder at Zeon, Aladdin and Wyv running away from some Beedrill? XD"

...Phew! I believe that's all the credit I can give FD! lol Now... FMF!! Nice job keeping our writer in line! ^_^ The editing seems fine as always. Can't recall any mistakes at the moment. So very nicely done, Mr. Editor. :)

And a special round of applause to Rinji for his contribution! Den Den Forest has an awesome design and naming scheme. ^_^ And Graphite Town sounds like it should be fun. :) Very nice work, my man!

Well everyone, pat yourselves on the back! Here's to another AWESOME SoF Pokémon chapter! :D