Talk:Grand Voyage- Log 10/@comment-4080028-20150403003642

So a figurative and literal storm is brewing around Harbinger Island this chapter; I see. Good chapter as always, my man. Though I suggest proofreading it when you get the chance, as there may be some typos here and there. Like adding "now" twice in a row in the same sentence.

Hmm, my thoughts on the chapter... Hmm... ... ... ... ...Well, I suppose what I can say here is that it's good to see something's happening. I kind of had the feeling Coco was just all talk and a small time trouble maker. And then he turns into a troubling individual with a twisted ideology. And now he's planning a coup d'etat. Man, I feel a bit of pity for Morris, Just doing his job and he happens to be in the wrong place at the wrong time. Then freaking Noir, the cloaked evil Marine hobbit assassinates him- ... ...Oh wow. XD It just sunk into me that he's legitimately dead. Well, this is unexpected, as usually no named characters die in the present (aside from those two v_v) and important characters tend to die in flashbacks to enforce drama and character motivation or what have you. For a named character with some actual lines of dialogue to be designated as dead in a One Piece story, well, Mr. Noir and Mr. Coco, you've gone and tainted the sacred rule of One Piece. For punishment, I suppose you'll be pushed off the ledge of Harbinger Island and slam hard into the rocky outcroppings below. And as the man who inspired this grisly demise also considered (I think he was the Roman emperor, Tiberius or something? He "raised" Caligula, in a very loose and incorrect sense of the word,) if they manage to survive the fall, there shall be sailors waiting below to beat them to death with oars.

Do not oppose the laws of Oda.

With that dark joke out of the way, I suppose all I can say is that it was cool to see Falstaff pull a Big Damned Heroes moment and save Sid. For some reason, I really liked Tekkai Ken. ...Though now that I think about it, Mutoryu/No Sword Style: Instant Death was a pretty cool move too.

Now all I'm wondering is why Sid's so good at understanding weather and what it is he's trying to find. Nevertheless, as I stated, despite not having much to write home about, this was still a decent chapter.

And on that note, I couldn't help but have this come to mind when I was reading from Noir's declaration of rebellion onward. Just that from thereon, everything I read gave me the sense of danger and dread this music inspires. Felt fitting to me.

| A STORM IS COMING!! DON