Talk:The new adventure:Captain vs Vice-captain/@comment-4438931-20120603113912

This was nice! Though to be honest, I kinda got lost a lot of times. xD But that's just me. I especially love Magnus' power. It's really unique, and extremely powerful, if used correctly *Remembers all about Aizen* Ah yes, Magnus' powers are really something I'm excited about. Criticisms, criticisms...? Hmm, I'd have to say that I guess there needs to be a more obvious distinction between what the characters are thinking, what their techniques are about, and the like. It was partly a reason why I got little sidetracked lost while reading the story. Other than that, it's all good. Keep it up!!!