Talk:The Birth of a Demon. Enter Roronoa Senshi/@comment-3507136-20130227231648

I thought the story went along well, at times it seemed a little rushed, and certain points didn't make much sense to me. That could just be my critical nature of being uber honest, or I could be a genius. Yeah I'd go with the first option aswell.

Anywho, there were several spelling mistakes and some grammar mistakes aswell. But I'm sure a quick second read through and you'd see them all :)

Overall I enjoyed the story. And I enjoyed the Ssssssssssss commitment to Hebi :D