User blog comment:Fantasy Detective/Pokemon SOF! Chapter 4: And Then There Were Four.../@comment-4080028-20140815014614

Alright!! :D I was super happy to see this chapter was finally uploaded, since I assumed it'd still be weeks till I saw it. XD Man, where to start this time...?

Well, I suppose I can start off by saying I'm loving the dynamics between Zeon and me. XD Seems we make quite the rivals. The comedy between us is just too hilarious sometimes, and I love the teamwork Zeon and Wyv had against the Beedrill horde. The Endure and Counter combo was especially epic. +_+ I also loved how they went in a complete half circle from each other, only to bump into each others' heads later. XD I greatly enjoyed the sense of danger that came from the Beedrill horde. It felt like these two trainers certainly were in over their heads. o_0 Glad to see it all worked out in the end though. ^_^ And Squirt... my precious, beloved Squirt... He was such a hero, by taking that Pin Missile assault head on for us like that! T_T I LOVE YOU, LITTLE BUDDY!! YOU'RE AWESOME, SQUIRT! T_T

Oh yeah! And I nearly forgot! I'm pretty curious to see how Zeon knew about where to strike the Beedrill for a critical hit. Now that I think about it... [gasps] CAN HE SEE AURA?!! 0.0 OK! THAT IS OFFICIALLY MY FIRST FAN THEORY FOR THIS STORY!! ZEON CAN SENSE AURAS!! WILL I BE RIGHT?! WILL I BE WRONG?! ONLY FD AND FMF WILL KNOW FOR SURE!!

...Getting back on track... XD It was cool to see FD's tactics work in his favor against Heracross. ^_^ He's definitely becoming the badass, brainy guy of the team. lol And I'm still sensing a clear Usopp vibe off of him, which I love. :D He can be really silly and funny, badass and brilliant, and even draw out some emotional feels when things get dramatic, like when he apologized to Caring. I'm definitely liking FD a lot. Speaking of our group of trainers, I was happy to see Caring rejoin our little group. ^_^ I didn't notice it before in chapter 3 and throughout this chapter, but it felt a bit emptier without her around. :/ When I saw her and FD make their grand return to help save Wyv and Zeon, that felt just so epic and awesome and heartwarming...! I loved it. :) And their teamwork was BEYOND AWESOME. +_+ I mean, I knew they were gonna do something with Fire attacks and Vulpix's Drought ability, but I had no idea they'd create a FRAKKING GIANT FIREBALL OF DEATH!! :D That was by FAR, the coolest combo I've seen since the fight with Ursaring. (I get the feeling that's going to be a comparison point from now on. XD Like, how cool is this fight compared to, say, ohh... THE FIGHT WITH URSARING?!! +_+)

OK, gotta calm down... lol Now... Hmm... Oh!! I sort of already expected FD would catch Heracross, since I remember you (Fantasy Detective) having a Heracross on one of your teams in Showdown, and how you'd mention how much you like Heracross. :P Still though, it was awesome to see FD catch it, and he's turning out to be a really cool addition to our team of trainers and pokemon. +_+ Naturally befitting one of my favorite pokemon in general. :P I also loved how Wyv worshipped and admired Heracross when he saw it. XD I feel like I would've done the same thing in that situation.

Umm, hmm... what else? Well, I forgot to say this earlier, but I'd love to know what Zeon and Treecko did to that Beedrill nest, to make 5 of them chase after them. o_0 I'm wondering if Treecko was playing around the nest and knocked it over or something. XD

It was great to see Prof. Kai again. :) Especially during a cutaway from the danger and action unfolding in the forest. lol It was a nice, calming breath of fresh air. I'm also very intrigued as to what specific pokemon he was referring to. I get the feeling it's a legendary Psychic type. But anyway, I felt it was also fun to be introduced to LFZ. He seems to be a promising new fun character as well. ^_^ I'm eagerly awaiting the day he catches up to the 4 other trainers. I'd love to see adventures unfold by then. :D

I was happy to see the trainers exit the forest, since I was starting to get bored of the location. XD Guess I was just really connecting with the character you based off of me by this point. Like, I could imagine how tired, injured and anxious he must've been to get going on their journey by that point. ^_^; Speaking of Wyv (me, lol) it was nice to see another attempt was made by Squirt and me to connect with Shinx. I can tell she's going to be quite the character. =_= ( <- suspicious look) And I was super happy to finally see her say something. XD It even too Squirt by surprise! XD I found it very, very interesting that she criticized all the "pointless" battles. Hmm... I wonder what this mysterious little lady's deal is... =_=

OH YEAH!! >_< And I liked seeing a detective get mentioned. Things are really getting exciting, aren't they? +_+ [nudges FD and FMF's shoulders] I can't wait to see what's awaiting us all in Graphite Town! :D

...OH! And I'm loving how battles are getting more inventive now, instead of just calling out attacks and seeing pokemon deal damage and stuff to each other. ^_^ Like I said, things are getting exciting here. +_+

And I guess to wrap things up, since I gotta go eat and visit the restroom... <_<; I'm still enjoying how Wyv is coming along. :) I just can't find any major faults to nag you guys about right now. XD ...OH!!! >_< And I like the whole "Wyv and his pokemon have strong, amazing auras" thing. +_+ I mean, I know it's to be expected for the leading character and all, but I just like how it makes me feel special, even if it isn't the real me. ^_^ [Chopper dance] I feel epic!! :D

And now, I'd like to mention how much fun it's going to be to see FD and Wyv team up together in a double battle. +_+ Things don't look good so far for us, but I have faith we'll pull through somehow. =_= (<- now it's a determined expression) Curse those kids for getting in our way and forcing us to battle. -_-+ And on top of that...

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THEY KNOCKED OUT SQUIRT!!! [insert frage emote here] 'YOU DON'T F****** DO THAT!!! I WILL TEAR THEM A NEW HOLE WHERE THE SUN DON'T SHINE!!! NO ONE MAKES MY BELOVED POKEMON FAINT!!! I WILL HAVE VENGEANCE!!! VENGEANCE, YOU HEAR?!!! I WILL-!!!'

... [continues to rant and rave for a few minutes befor ehe calms down]

...OK, think I got that out of my system. ^_^; But seriously! That upset me so much, to see Squirt faint in battle. T_T And it's all my (Wyv's) fault, for underestimating the opponent and overestimating myself (Wyv.) I have no idea how I (Wyv) could ever hope to get Squirt's forgiveness for this. Let along the fact I (Wyv) may end up costing us (FD and Wyv) the battle. v_v Please Shinx... Please do your stuff for daddy. AVENGE OUR FRIEND, SWEETIE!!!!!!!!

OK... XD That about sums up my comment. Awesome work as always, FD!!! :D And great editing as well, FMF!! Awesome suggestions, whatever they may have been!! I can't wait for chapter 5! ^_^