Talk:Wings Of The Wind: Chapter 2/@comment-4080028-20130523235116

Right, as I was trying to say before my comment was so rudely interrupted. This is a very interesting chapter for me. I understand that life in slavery and the inhumanity towards Kai and the other gladiators were intolerable, but it still amazed me at how violent he was (in my opinion.) o_0 Or maybe it's the effectiveness as a fighter instilled into him mixed with his cunning that got my attention. In any case, I certainly wasn't expecting this, and for that reason, I give this chapter a good deal of praise.

The pacing was excellent, by the way. Not too slow and not too fast. You gave each scene the amount of time it deserved. And the fighting, well, that was just a good deal of fun to read. I loved seeing what you had in store for the Quasquatch, considering I remembered seeing it mentioned in the chat months ago. And as I have a bad habit of not checking everyone else's characters outside of Uber Committee business, I was glad to see more of Kai and what he's like in the midst of battle.

Once again Kai, you've proven that you have a promising, enjoyable and overall great story in the works. Nicely done. :)