Talk:One Dream: Voyage 4/@comment-3507136-20130116174443

What a long Chapter! Butt well worth the time invested.

Kept me at the edge of my seat heh. And I'm hell! It was a brilliant first arc to your series wyvern and an even better end to it! I cannot wait to see what is next hehe.

And West Blue eh? Same as Nova!! Guess they may meet sometime huh? ;)

Also, here are the only two mistakes I found. (two again!) but fear not! They're merely spelling mistakes. So here they are:

"With the cpatin pinned"

And

"This justifiably frighteened"

Other than that Wyv, reading your's and madmans stories, they're so well done and described that they make me feel inferior! I guess I'll never rival you two in story writing eh? :) Keep up the amazing work!