Talk:Deangello G. Mockinjay/@comment-3387274-20171006130637

You have a considerably larger problem than grammar; All of the devil fruit described there are either things that already exist, or or far too overpowered to be allowable. In short you need to come up with different fruit.

And calling them the rarest of all is a nonsense statement; every devil fruit is a unique one of a kind thing that only exists while nobody's eaten it. specific types of devil fruit, like logia or mythical zoans, are rare, but the fruit themselves are effectively all equal in rarity.