Talk:Walk in the Rain/@comment-3507136-20140707133422

Well it was a good start to the story, an intense get go with action straight away and dodgy characters here and there. I did enjoy this and will continue reading as it's clear this group are going to get up to alot of mischief.

But there are a few things I was iffy on. (Need to be harsh in my critiques ^^)

For starters, I was not too sure on the lack of introduction to the main characters, I understand that the information can be gathered from their pages, but nonetheless I feel it should be a part of the story descriptive wise.

There wasn't much description on the scenery, though it left my mind limitless to imagine where they were, it still didn't give me a solid picture of where exactly they where.

I have not long woken up so I'm a little slow on my take today and have already forgot the other thing I was going to say, However, despite these downsides for me. You managed to keep the story interesting and leave an intense cliffhanger. Kudos to your story. Expect more of these comments soon~