Talk:The Wild Generation/@comment-25995644-20141220135226/@comment-4072803-20150106174746

Not to be rude, but I'm not sure we're allowed to actually edit the events of the G-17 Marine Raid, as from what we've heard it's actually very important to UH's story. And even if for some reason he allowed this (which I doubt, but who knows), then making a promise like the one at the end there is out of character for Knave and I believe a few other members, at least the 'annihilating anyone who got close to the One Piece that wasn't them' sort of deal. At the very worst that would get them up against the Straw Hats, which wouldn't really work anyhow -.-'. Also, I don't entirely agree with you taking control of other crews and Swift like that, unless UH gave you specific instructions to do this.

All in all, I'm not going to point blank remove it, but I suggest this be looked over and consulted by/with the person who came up with the whole thing. There's a reason why the rest of us haven't edited that area (I THINK).