Talk:Simon's Story/@comment-4080028-20130420204539/@comment-4080028-20130422010122

Seems you added on to the page after all. I like that this is standing out more and more, come to think of it. It was a good chapter, like the last one, and it helped to draw us even further into what was going on. All in all, it seemed kinda slow paced to me, so I can't say much. But it was decent, and did a good job at moving the story along. That's the important thing.

Very nice chapter once again, Ika. Kudos to your hard work. :)