User blog comment:Fantasy Detective/Pokemon SOF! Chapter 1: First Jolly Steps!/@comment-24070327-20140624015835

Kishishi. Nice going FD. I rather enjoyed this chapter. Particularly its flow. Not too fast, yet not too slow. Skipped over a few things, but only so that you could reference them at a more suitable time. Everything was wonderfuly ordered and for that I commend you. Look forward to more.