Talk:Regenerated Pirates/@comment-4080028-20140122153342/@comment-4080028-20140122172516

Well, take it from me, whose been chosen to lead the Uber Committee (which deals with making sure characters aren't too powerful and that things stay within canon, as written by Oda,) that so far, Takuya seems to be a decent character at the moment. I don't often see a pirate captain who's also a perv, so I liked the thought put behind that. Usually, we see captains who may or may not get excited about girls, though the big womanizer amongst their crew tends to be someone else. In short, I found it interesting that Takuya's not just a captain and martial artist, but that he has his sexual deviant side as well.

On that note, while it's OK for us to write about perverted characters for the sake of comedy, much like how it's done in One Piece, I would also like to warn you that there are limits. Just be careful with how far you go with Takuya's kinkiness. Trying to peep on Sakura seems appropriate enough, as far as One Piece is concerned, but try to make sure Takuya doesn't go into ecchi or hentai territory either. We also tend to frown upon that here.

Finally, I have to say, despite the fact so many people here are doing it already (including myself at one point,) I can't help but enjoy the fact that you're using Kenichi as Takuya's appearance. I like HSDK myself, so that was a treat. Though the more I think about it, the more I'm beginning to wonder if you based Takuya on Kenichi himself, since Takuya reminds me of Kenichi in several ways. Such as his interest in girls, his kindness, his martial arts experience, and so on. Not necessarily a bad thing, as I was inspired to make Dracule Sakura thanks to Shigure Kosaka, though again, if Takuya becomes a complete Kenichi clone, that might upset a few people here, as it could be taken as plagiarism.

In summary, Takuya seems like a promising character with lots of potential. :) So as long as you steer away from the possible problems, such as plagiarism or overly explicit sexual material, then I can only see great things for Takuya and his crew.

Nicely done so far, Grandfire. I hope Takuya turns out to be an awesome character.