Talk:Graveyard of a Madman Part 32/@comment-4080028-20150907043140

Sorry for the wait, lots have been going on (and yet at the same time, it feels like nothing much is going on either. Odd.) Anyway! I just got done reading some AWESOME One Piece chapters today, so I'm still hyped as hell over One Piece stuff! So what better time to read this than now?!

As always, it was a good chapter; proof you're one of our better writers. Though you'll have to forgive me. I'm going from something made by Oda to, well, one of us (including myself.) XD So if I seem not so enthusiastic, it's because I'm having trouble shifting gears from one writing style to another. That or maybe the slow, calmer pace of this chapter wasn't much for me to write home about. I'm way too used to   and  So when it's mostly just a quiet sneak in, sabotage and get out mission in comparison, well... You get my point.

Nonetheless though, I loved seeing Lys' acting skills in action! ^_^ I found myself enjoying it more than I thought I ever would. lol Just seeing how well Lys can act so much like, well, NOT Lys was amazing! Makes me proud of what I've done with her so far. Very nice work with her, Rinji. Though there's one complaint I have with the scene: Kris. Her rank isn't Vice Admiral. It's Rear Admiral. The Vice Admiral above her would be none other than her own adoptive father and mentor, Galaxy Blade.

Anyway, the way Chio's scene ended was VERY nice. I loved the surprise twist near the end, since you were setting things up quite nicely, and yet still subtlely as well. Like "oh s***, Chio's screwed!" And then TADA! Plot twist!! It's Chio's teacher/"dad"/etc.!! It was an awesome surprise for me, and felt very One Piece-esque to me to boot. I highly approve of what you did there. The way it was pulled off, just...! WOW! Definitely something worth emulating here.

So I'll cut it at that. Nice chapter, man! Good luck on 33!