Talk:Sail On!: Chapter 1/@comment-3507136-20120927222033

"Hey meet our new crew members, Mira and Buzz. Mira fixed you up and Buzz wants to beat you up." - Should be a quote! I think I laughed harder than I should have at this!

A great first chapter and was a delight to read. I found it amusing and intriguing at the same time!!

Though the only thing that annoyed me was the constant would this would that hehe....