Talk:BORDERLESS: Chapter 1/@comment-4080028-20140608024445

Interesting start to your story, Reaper. Satsui seems like a cool guy so far. Also amused to see a Majin appear so soon too. Makes me feel pretty proud of the work I put into the tribe. ^_^

Anyway, this wasn't a bad first start to your series at all. Felt just right as a first chapter. Gave us some info we would need, like who our main character is, what he is, and so forth. And I think it left off on a good note. Gets you awaiting the fight between Satsui and Sorin. Also, seems there was a typo near the end. When Sorin suggests making a deal with Satsui, you missed the I in in. But that's all I found.

Though I am curious why John and his family haven't said anything or showed shock that the boys' hero is getting into a fight with some random stranger, let alone the fact the hero is a recently self-appointed pirate no less. This is the only thing that leaves me confused, since I expected some kind of response from this newly revealed information.

Other than that, everything was solid. Nice chapter, Reaper. :)