User blog comment:Fantasy Detective/Pokemon SOF! Chapter 1: First Jolly Steps!/@comment-6418172-20160809135932

By adding music you made this a lot better. It was already a good story, but now it's a 10/10. Well, more info on the PKMN would be nice. There are so many and it's been a long time so I don't remember all of them. Fortunately a lot of the ones you used here were iconic, but Pangoro I had to look up lol. Maybe add pictures like you have for the trainer? Either way, this story is pretty good so far. I'm looking forward to see what comes next.