User blog comment:Fantasy Detective/Pokemon SOF! Chapter 3: Buggy Forest/@comment-3507136-20140725105546

Ferno 1: Hup!

Ferno 2: Hup!

Ferno's: HOORAH!!

As always man an enjoyable chapter! I finally had some free time to read it too! So glad I chose to spend what precious time I had reading this! Well worth it, filled with plenty of laughs, knuckleheaded moments and exciting one. I love the way it's seeming to show Caring as probably the strongest of the three, followed by Wyvern and then FD. It's good to see them all have their own strifes as well as ways of trying to solve them! Instead of just following the main character.

I also like the fact that their problems are different, for example, Caring just wants to be accepted into their group by FD. And is even going out on everything in kindness to them! seriously they're pretty lucky to have her! As well as Wyvern's problem to connect with his pokemon as well as catching them and nicknaming them, but is still able to train them really well. And then there is FD, both my favourite and least favourite of the group. I love the fact he's seemingly the only one with common sense in the group, his jagged teeth expressions entertain the crap out of me!! But the fact he get's annoyed easily by Carings simplicity and not Wyverns irks me :3 While I think Caring is awesomely cute and powerful, as Wyv is pretty strong and straightforward. I like how it is actually FD! who seemingly requires the most development, people wise and pokemon wise. But I love the sets we seem to have, FD = Grass, Wyv =Water and Caring = Fire.

Lastly, because I don't want to write an essay like Wyvern hehe. I liked the shady cameo of those characters midway. It was nice to see Izzy in there too!! Thanks for putting a little in so early! I'm kind of hoping this boss guy and this Ryu guy actually clash!! I want to see this legendary battle play out!! I'm already heated up and excited for the battle!!

I look forward to how this pans out man. You're really good at writing these stories!! So long too!! Keep up the amazing work man. I'm proud of you.