Talk:Wings Of The Wind: Chapter 1/@comment-4080028-20130121111343

Heh, seems that collabs are taking a back seat to individual stories. Kai, this was a pleasure to read. :) You're quite the writer, my friend. I really like the sound of Saint Caligula, now that I see it in story format. That, and I find it suiting that his name would go hand in hand in a story that takes place in a location called Tartarus. Dunno why, but I guess it's that whole Greco-Roman theming thing going on.

Kai seems like quite the cool character too. I'm enjoying seeing him in action. In fact, judging from chapter 1 alone, I can tell you'd be a lot of fun to collab with. In any case, I think I may have spotted some mistakes, but i'm unsure whether they were intentional spellings or not. "he knew he couldn't get trapped with such an opportunity come along." That would be 'coming,' not 'come,' right? Also, "He stuck his hand of the opening." That's 'on,' and not 'of'?

Anyway, i'll be sure to read more whenever you get back to working. :) Very nice read.