Talk:The Bloodstained Throne: A Prologue to War and the Flower that Bloomed on a Storm/@comment-5008281-20160111045749

Wow! Talk about family issues! Very good story Rf! I was seriously impressed with your work in your characters. While one thing you need to work on it description, I had somewhat of a good idea of what to think of the character's looks, however when it came to visualizing their surroundings, all I could muster was a generic castle background, like from the original Castlevania games.

Otherwise, one thing I would also work on is the way you set up scenes between characters, there was a very complex story behind them, and sometimes I didn't know which one was talking unless I reread the whole scene over again to get the context correct. So what I would do is put more "Tinean said" or "Date shouted" sort of things along with more of the dialog.

You set up a very good and complicated story behind your RedClaw family, and I really liked the medieval theme you had going on throughout it. This was indeed a solid entry in the contest, and I cannot wait to work with you on future projects.