Talk:The Beginning of the End: Chapter 1/@comment-4080028-20140208094704/@comment-7905762-20140208191110

After reading several stories on this wiki, I truly did try to emulate the format that most people use:

Person #1: "Insert dialogue."

"Stage direction/Non-verbal instances"

Person #2: "Insert dialogue."

I tried my absolute best to write it like that, but no matter what I did, I just could NOT get it to work for me. eventually, I just capitulated and wrote it in classic story form, and I think I got a much better result from it. I know it's not the norm around here, and it makes reading the story a little more tedious, but I did try to write it screen-play(ish) style.

Thank you for your comments, though, Wyv. I plan on trying to make this a really good story, I appreciate your input. :D