Talk:New Voyage! Chapter 1/@comment-3986064-20120729125126

I'm pretty impressed. I was able to fully imagine the characters (although I lost my images after certain moments... ugh, I need more concentration)

The chapter was pretty nice, but somehow I just felt like the scenes were going from one place to the other really fast, some changes felt too sudden and also the shooting of the old man... the pirate raid, those really felt like they weren't described enough. (But I guess it's understandable since it was at the end of the chapter and you basically became tired)

At the beginning the descriptions and dialogue was really good and I chuckled at the scene where he just looked at the barn and it's shade (I imagined it in manga panels and it looked really nice)

And my favorite part was "HOLY MOTHER OF FLYING POTATO KING'S!!!"

Just epic XDXDXDXD. 5 Words which if combined just sound damn too hilarious.

I can see clearly inspiration from the storyline of One Piece and pirate raids being pretty common are understandable things from the world of One Piece, but something felt weird...

Did Iceburg write a book about Tom?