User blog comment:Fantasy Detective/Pokemon SOF! Chapter 4: And Then There Were Four.../@comment-3507136-20140827204238

Once again a good chapter FD! You're a better writer than I took you for!

I enjoyed this chapter greatly as it was filled with Mishaps, drama and battles, I like the fact that you are telling us what the pokemon are saying. It gives us an extra vibe about it, as well as making the pokemon more diverse now that to us they say more than "pika-pi" or "Diglett-I".

I liked the tension between FD and Caring, and was happy to see how it was resolved and the fun banter between them. It's nice to see them connecting as characters. It's like you're capturing each character perfectly and not changing them for the sake of plot. I enjoyed the fact you're keeping what happened to the beedrill secret for now, and that you were able to introduce Labby so casually without it looking out of place.

The story is going well so far FD and I hope you keep the pace up. Don't give up man because the story is terrific so far. Long to read but worth every word.