Talk:Muko Muko no mi/@comment-24094348-20180201102914

Ok I know I am not the best person to talk about this, but punctuation is a key factor in writting. Are you trying to say that you can create a Aura, that can be shapped, Harden, or collapsed. When collasped or harden anything that touches it is scent to the void. Also as a interesting side effect of this paramecia the user can not be sensed by Haki.

With that being said I see a problem with this thing. First off it is extrememly broken. You can make a substance that can send all it touches to the void.Don't pass go, don't collect a hundread dollars. Now we have devil fruits that can kill with a touch, but they are usually based off science and they can be countered with methods. This power just sends you to the void. No questions asked. Ironiclly we also have another devil fruuit that does just send you to the void. So there might be a contridiction there. Not only that, but this devil fruit removes the user from haki senses. That one is a bit exteme to me. Not only do you want to be able to send people to the void with a single touch, by you also do not want to be sense. That way you can just pop up and kill people instantly. This thing needs to be a bit more balance. I am all ok with game breaking powers, but there should be limits.