Talk:Siren Pirates/@comment-3337232-20171012063608

Hey there, welcome to SOF. I'm lvdoomien, the Admiral in Absentia of the site. I read thru your crew description and I like what I see so far, even if it's rather bare bones. However, the only real problem I want to point out is that the Sirens interact with the Straw Hat crew. Technically, that isn't allowed the rules. However, I just want to say that to be an interesting crew they don't Have to interact with the Straw Hats, y'know? Maybe Senwith went missing when the Siren Pirates first encountered Mercury, or whatever group Mercury is with if they're a single person, thus starting a heated feud between them and Azith because she blames them for Senwith going missing. Or with Three's A Crowd they don't have to be helping the Straw Hats specifically, maybe they help out an old crew of pirates that have been stranded and separated on Genboli for decades. The idea I'm trying to push here buddy is Originality. With all due respect, having your crew meet the Straw Hats is a pretty basic, go-to idea. But if they meet with something Else that you created yourself, the interaction there would be more unexpected and interesting for the audience and for yourself as well. I hope my criticism helps, and if you have any other questions do reach out to me on my talk page.