Talk:We Are!/@comment-3507136-20130109160250

I believe this was a good start to Jim's journey, and I'll enjoy reading more of it!!

This is the first time I believe I've read a story with a marine aas the main character!! It was quite entertaining to imagine the one piece world on the side of a marine's view instead of a pirates :)

I found it entertaining to the very end, and I only found I think 3 spelling mistakes which was brilliant!! (I'm not good with grammar like some people.)

Sorry if it is not enough feedback btw :)