Talk:One Dream: Voyage 5/@comment-3507136-20130116175201/@comment-4080028-20130116192554

Thank once again for the comment. :) And i'm glad my humorous start to the chapter entertained you. (Though I wonder if you noticed any other similiarities with the snow-men. :P) I'm even more appreciative that I have some constructive criticism to work with. It was probably due to me not thinking clearly at the time when I added that, but I also wanted to keep some things in common with the previous Sabaody Archipelago story I wrote around a year ago. One of which was the auction house being attacked by the Street Punk.

Now that you mention it, outright stating that a place of business for more-or-less 'legal' slavery even exists sounds foolish to me. I may change that when I go over Voyage 5 sometime for any spelling and grammar mistakes, or just to patch up any errors in storytelling. But until then, I may as well point out that that news story was meant to formally introduce the audience to what was yet to come, and give everyone a sense that Chris was getting in over his head.