Talk:The Beginning of the End: Chapter 1/@comment-4080028-20140208094704/@comment-7905762-20140209021810

Oh, I understand what you're saying now. Well, I do plan on making it feel more like One Piece throughout the story; the humor is one of my favorite aspects of the series. However, I felt like there were very few places that I could put silliness into this specific chapter without it kind of demeaning the seriousness of what I was intending. Of course, this will be something I work on and address in later chapters. :) Thanks for clarifying, Wyv!