Talk:A Cloaked Figure and a Grand Reveal! I'm Going to be the Pirate King!/@comment-4080028-20140913222326

Heh, this was a fun read compared to the first chapter. I love the idea put behind the Devil Fruit. And unlike FD, I don't mind if you're doing the same "aim for Pirate King" and "Will of D. protagonist" storyline. I've been fulfilled enough with other users doing different, original stories here, so I don't really need something new by this point. Just a fun story will be good enough; which seems to be what you're delivering by this point.

Also, seems you accidentally bolded a sentence at the top. Thought I'd inform you. And I'm already beginning to wonder who this cloaked figure is. I get the feeling he may be White's first mate later or something. I just get that vibe from the guy. XD

Anyway, good chapter like before. Best of luck with your next one. :)