User blog:Wyvern 0m3g4/Devil Fruit Dilemma

Yo everyone! (Gah, I miss saying that on a daily basis. XD) It's Wyv again, with a question this time. Now earlier, I had made the same question on my chat blog, but since barely anyone noticed, I decided to copy/paste it here, to make things easier. Here's what I wrote:

"Guys, I have some news. I was playing around with some ideas for a sort of rival pirate crew I was considering making for my Jolly Pirates. I was thinking of making them an all female crew known as The Valkyrie Pirates. And when I got to thinking of what kind of awesome ability the captain should have, I had this one idea for a Devil Fruit today, but i'm not sure if it'd be allowable :\ (though then again, i'm very critical against myself anyway.)

To get to the point, I was wondering if I could make a Paramecia Devil Fruit that can control my own made up particles. I was thinking these particles (known as "Zueton Particles") could absorb ambient energy, such as heat, light, radiation, etc., and then discharge the spent up energy as electricity. But the problem here is...

For starters, it sounds too much like a forced Logia in my opinion, no matter how cool or how much I like this idea. Secondly, i'm not sure if there should be more detail added to these particles or not (to make matters worse, I only have a very small understanding on particles and the physics behind them.)

Nonetheless though, i'd still love to use this idea as a Devil Fruit, so I wanted to run this by everyone and see if this would be green-lighted or not.

DISCLAIMER: Remember, i'm making this a PARAMECIA. The user CANNOT BECOME Zueton Particles, and can only generate electricity by absorbing nearby energy and converting it into electricity. Furthermore, the user CANNOT MOVE NOR ATTACK at the speed of light, since Ferno kindly informed me that electric material cannot reach light speed. Therefor, despite the limiters I placed on this Devil Fruit, I still feel a bit awkward about the fact that it generates electricity, when there's already a Logia Devil Fruit that does that (Enel/Eneru's Rumble Rumble Fruit/Goro Goro no Mi.) And despite THAT, i'd still love to see this idea be made, because I just find it to be so cool.

So yeah, i'm in a bind here. :\ Mind giving me a bit of help, anyone? Should I choose a different Devil Fruit idea? Alter the Zueton Particle concept? Or is it fine?"

Yeah, it's SUPER lengthy. >_< But i'd appreciate it if someone would read this and give me a hand here.