Talk:One Dream: Voyage 8/@comment-3387274-20131125031614

Finally got round to reading this, and it has to be said, well worth the wait, Bro. Spike seems to be set up for a huge Oda-style tragic backstory. the quick cutting between events helps to establish his character and the setting, but also has the side effect of making it hard to determine what's going on sometimes. I actually missed the fact that he'd fought the first time I read, and I don't actually know where "''Spike: HEY! LEMME DOWN, YOU JERK!" came from at all. Even so, it was a good, enjoyable chapter. Well done.''