Talk:One Dream: Voyage 8/@comment-3387274-20131125031614/@comment-4080028-20131125043408

After skimming through the chapter just now, I agree that the sudden change from one scene to the next felt pretty awkward. I was experimenting with something new for me, and it seems I got mixed results. I think what I should have done, is add that this occured at a later date than the first scene, as I did later on in the chapter.

Gotta say, and I know it may sound a little childish of me, but I was absolutely elated to see you had read this and left such wonderful feedback, as well as constructive criticism. Just made my night. Thank you so much, bro. :)