User blog comment:Wyvern 0m3g4/To Renew or Not to Renew?/@comment-3392155-20121212235318

Well Aniki I don't know if this willl help you or not, If you feel the need to rewrite some things or maybe rethink on how you want it done. I'd say save all the work you done before hand, Reread through it all and if need be write your new ideas on a sepret note book/what word doc you use. Maybe ask your brother or someone else you know that likes to write and see if he/she can pin point anything that might need changed worded different. Aside from that. I feel that you done a really great job on the jolly pirates but as i said it's just me. Hope i can help in any way or if you just need to rant, I'll be here to listen/read ya know.