Talk:The story continues: A special person appears/@comment-4080028-20120514184106

Very nice way to follow up after the first chapter, Santouryuu. Come to think of it, Marimo is sort of reminding me of Zoro every now and again. Other than that little opinion of mine, you didn't dissapoint with the action, that's for sure. I loved seeing Marimo progress so much over time, and i'm getting a good feel for his character now. I also enjoyed the sibling relationship he had with Hinata, and was quite pissed as well when the dojo was destroyed and the master was defeated. Also seeing Marimo get hit with a cannonball and stabbed in the stomach was a nice tough, as it made me actually feel worried for Marimo. If you worry about a character, then that's a good sign that you're developing interest in him/her. So I really liked that part, and even more so when Marimo defeated the first 3 pirates.

Other than that, I love the naming conventions you're using for Marimo's attacks. Very original, and very fun to read. Keep up the good work, Santouryuu!