Talk:One Dream: Voyage 3/@comment-3507136-20130116171101

Wow, what an exciting cliffhanger! Oh the dread of pirates in site, and how such peace can be deterred!

Can't spell slaughter without laughter! Hah! Brilliant line!

Anyway, I had time in work so I read the chapters carefully, as such I writ down any mistakes I found in hope I could inform you of them and fix them. :)

Only found two this chapter! so brilliant! Anyway the two are:

"The male villager decided to cut off his older neighbour off quickly"

I feel there was no need for the second 'off', I could be mistaken though. The other was.

"The ensign held his arm out to bloack"

Probably a spelling mistake or I'm just dumb and don't know enough good words heh heh :P Anyways, Good Chapter!