Talk:Simā Sáo Zhāng/@comment-3507136-20111031095117/@comment-3507136-20111031123925

Im making my progress, blame the fact your character's catch my eyes more as they are more detailed and better than a majority. Im not just targeting you so stop incinuating that I am, I did point this fact out on the other character's page but you pretty much ignored me, It's against canon because The government is working fine in the canon, Your also forgetting Kong, Sengoku, Aokiji, Kizaru and Akainu are at the top, so for an 18 and 22-25 year old to launch a successful coup de tat against the World's strongest Organisation is EXTREMELY Overpowered. You may not see it that way but I do. Im asking that you say they launch a Coup de tat that came close to success but failed (Due to the fact that if it was successful it would mean that they have defeated Sengoku, Garp, Kong, Aokiji, Akainu and Kizaru Which I say is highly impossible with just VA;s and normal marine's, not t mention you'd have to go against the marine's and VA's who are also against the coup de tat) There are many faults to stating a succesful Coup de tat against the Government on a fanon that follows Canon. So please change it. Im not trying to target or critisize, im trying to help.