Talk:Graveyard of a Madman Part 33/@comment-4080028-20150908214846

Alright, nice chapter again. Glad to see the writer's block subsided. Er, I have to say though, I'm feeling a bit nervous and uncomfortable with what I sense are implications that these ships may be more modern in design than they're supposed to be; as in, these are sounding like real Navy ships in our world due to things like bridges and code-locked doors, as opposed to the lower-tech Marine ships in One Piece. And quite frankly, I don't really like that at all. It's not just a personal difference in taste for me, but it would also be easily breaking canon because the best the One Piece world has to offer is Pacifista technology (meaning, advanced cyborgs and laser beams.) Of course, I know very, VERY little about ship design, so who knows? Maybe there were bridges in ships during the Ages of Exploration and Piracy. And hey, maybe there is an armored door. I mean, metal DOES exist in One Piece, and the Marines aren't going to be so stupid as to leave something important behind an easily destructible wooden door. But it's that code thing that still bothers me. :/ I dunno, maybe if it was described as a Den Den Mushi, I'd relax a bit. But for now, I'm just not comfortable with it.

As for Knave's end of "Operation: Sneak and Sink," I could totally believe he'd end up screwing things up by getting into a fight with the biggest, nastiest dude on the ship. lol The Marimo ain't got no time for your tact and strategy! He's gonna tear s*** up! ...Ahem. Yes, er... Anyway, the fight between him and Polatsu is looking good. Hope to see how it escalates. And yes, Knave's Hyper Mode is indeed a great way to end the chapter. Gotta keep us on the edge of our seats for more, no?

As always, an enjoyable chapter. Nicely done.