Talk:The meeting of four girls./@comment-24070327-20140111030955

Interesting. I liked how everybody didn't initially get along, and that and Starfire never truly warmed up to everyone. Instead it seemed to me that she simply decided to tolerate them. Just goes to show that one can not make strong bonds within the span of a single day. It's a good change of pace from the instant friendships I see at Fanfiction.com a lot. Another good thing is that the story flowed very naturally. The only thing I could complain about was the lack of detail and some grammatical errors. Kind of wish a lot of what happened was covered more closely. Other than that, good story Caring-chan.