Talk:Byakuran/@comment-5249174-20120630053850

Oh dear uhh....hmm well can I just say, I mean, I might be wrong but, if you're going to talk to the reader (Well firstly I would like to say thank you for taking your time to take a look at my charecter. ) Yo should put that into either your signature or the Behind the Scenes. Appearance is the first subsection that is read, and when I read that line I instantly lost interest...so yeah...But apart from that it looks pretty good