Talk:Grand Voyage- Log 2/@comment-4080028-20140510022100

You haven't disappointed me yet, little bro. Log 2 was just as, if not more fun than Log 1. Especially since I had fun seeing D'Artagnan and Knave interact with each other. lol Loved the bit about economy. It's one of those kinds of jokes I'd never see coming, but once I understand it, it just makes too much sense to have not seen it coming. For some reason, imagining Knave blowing spit bubbles amused me too. lol I definitely see the man child in him now.

I enjoyed the pacing of this chapter, since the last one made it kind of hard for me to focus on Knave and Sieg, so it became difficult to truly appreciate the chapter as I had this one. Speaking of details again, I also had fun seeing Art's reactions to Knave's name. If it weren't for me paying attention to your pages and the chat so often, I probably wouldn't have enjoyed them as much as I had. I guess for once, spoilers enhanced the quality of a story for me this time around. o_o;

Oh, and it seems you forgot to italicize the last of Art's thoughts at the end. With that said, I look forward to what's in store for our pirate and money-lender. :) (Oh, and as a side-note, I love how they both had the same goal in mind. XD That's awesome.)