Talk:One Piece of Music: Chapter 2/@comment-4080028-20131203175058/@comment-24070327-20131203194926

The worst part is, I noticed some of the misplaced words earlier. I just never got around to fixing this even though I kept telling myself I was going to do that. Thank you for the constructive criticism though. I figured the exposition was a little much. Noodle told me that too but I don't listen to him very often. <_< Mew. Either way, Thanks for the review. I appreciate your help in making me a better writer. Glad you're excited about Aharon and Iroppoi too. I thought the two of them wouldn't be well received because they were marines and was worried that including them would weaken the story. I'm happy that is not the case. And now I'm going to edit this chapter and those that come after. If you'll excuse me...