Talk:One Piece of Music: Chapter 3/@comment-4080028-20131203202655

Have to admit, I was a bit nervous to start reading this chapter, because I noticed it was longer than the others. But it wasn't as bad as I thought, and got through it easily enough. This is probably my first favorite chapter of the series, seeing as it felt like stuff was finally starting to happen. I mostly enjoyed Thoosa throughout the chapter, both during her sillier perverse moments and her serious, epic ones. Due to reading the cyclops page beforehand, I was familiar with the strength of their people, but I had no idea it resulted in such massive muscles. o_0 No wonder they get tired out afterward! lol

All in all, the action was fun and epic, so I really enjoyed reading this particular chapter. Albeit, I felt you were kind of too explicit with the constant swearing and sexual references. While the majority of users here are old enough to handle such content, I fear that any wandering younger reader might get unnecessarily exposed to something they're not mature enough to handle yet. So I have to remove points on this chapter's overall score for those two reasons. The swearing could at least be censored as f*** and s***, but the sexual references look to be even harder to hide. <_<

Well, enough rambling about that. Mature content or not, this was a fun chapter and it got me more interested in this series. :) Good work! Looking forward to what goes on in chapter 4!