Talk:The Beginning of the End: Chapter 1/@comment-5008281-20140208091022

Okay, dude, I never say this, not even once. But this is deep... this is seriously deep. Anyone can write a story about a storm that breaks apart a family, but the sheer emotional level that you have reached is very seldom seen around these parts. You've already said a whole hell of a lot about your main character without writing much at all, and that is a true gift. I seriously hope you stick around so that I can see more of this. Your pros are not perfect, but what's perfect? They are GOOD! I really can see myself becoming a true believer in this story and constantly reading more of it. You're not worried about how powerful your character is or how awesome of a devil fruit he has, you're here to tell me about a kid who is on the search, and needing help from his friends in doing so and I believe it. I can see this story with my mind's eye and that is awesome.

You are a true writer, and let no one EVER tell you otherwise. Kudos for that.